Monday, November 24, 2014
My Visual Poem
NiitsuO VisualPoem from Kapaa Middle School MEDIA on Vimeo.
My poem was about expression and expressing your self. At first I just Wanted express myself with the poem and the visuals and just film and say random things that I felt like saying. After realizing that I wasn't aloud to do that I did my poem on expression it self. I felt my visuals didn't really make an impact. I forgot to check out a camera twice so Two of my b-roll shots didn't make any sense but I had to use them. The first b-roll shot that didn't make sense was when I was messing around and filmed the lock on the door to our classroom.
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Good lyrics
ReplyDeleteneeds to be a bit longer
good visuals
Really good B-Roll!
ReplyDeleteYou can see the cuts when they are writing on the paper.
Really good audio levels!
The ending time-lapse was good.
ReplyDeleteLittle too short?
The rhyme scheme, "ugly as a possum" was enjoyable.
I liked your poem it was really creative!
ReplyDeleteYou might have wanted to get a little better b-roll.
Other than that, your poem lyrics were really cool and your poem was great!
good lighting
ReplyDeletecover up cuts
good sound
I like the music in the back round.
ReplyDeleteI think one thing that could be better is to have more b-roll.
I also like how clear you talked in your voiceover.
I liked the timelapse of the people writting.
ReplyDeletealso could have used more b-roll
I liked the affects.
Poem was read good, need more b-roll that apllies to the story, good one text layover
ReplyDeleteCompliment:The effects on the high-five shot were awesome!
ReplyDeleteArea of Improvement:The time-lapse though was kinda dragging on and on! got kinda bored
Compliment:The time-lapse was pretty cool.
I like the time lapse at the end
ReplyDeleteIt could of had more shots
I like the effects at the begining
I like the music and audio
ReplyDeleteTry to film outside of school, I would like to see some nice photos in our community
I like your poem!! GREAT JOB
I like that you got b-roll.
ReplyDeleteYou could have got more b-roll that matched better.
I also like that the music matched.
Really cleaver words
ReplyDeleteRight to left to left to right
good shots
has good b-roll and visuals
ReplyDeletedid not have that much b-roll
good audio and voiceover
I liked the lyrics it was a pretty good poem! The part where you were writing went on a little long, I think you could have shortened it a little and added another shot. I liked the video of you writing.
ReplyDeleteI like the B-Roll of you and Logan High-Fiving!!
ReplyDeleteYou can see cuts in one shot and some of the B-Roll doesn't match the words.
Cool effects
Visuals were great as well as the voice over
ReplyDeleteYou only had three different shots and I would like to see more
Music and transitions were great
I like the lyrics of your poem. The first shot in the beginning didn't quit match with your lyrics. Great visuals
ReplyDeleteCompliment: I liked your visuals. They were creative and had nice effects. (And I was in one ^.^)
ReplyDeleteCriticism: Sometimes your visuals didn't match with your poem though.
Compliment: I like the way you recited your poem.